The beginning. The beginning of a challenge, that will test my wits, and abilities. The game so many have tried and failed at. The race for only the most daring and brave people. The wind, brushes the grass, and I feel it against my pale skin. I don’t know what's behind me. I don't know what's up ahead. But I know I'll be lucky to make it out, alive…
The booming voice comes on over the top of the trees…
"On your mark, are you set?, GO!!!"
I loved when you shared this in class, and I still enjoy it when I read it now. I would say that you should really expand on this piece, placing it into the context of a developed writing selection, and not just a small blurb, the way it reads now.
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